Gave it a read, and its honestly great. The first 2 chapters were quite iffy in my opinion, but the 3rd chapter and the reintroduction of the photos and the album was what cemented this fic of being nothing short of amazing. I feel as if your writing skills have absolutely improved in the past few chapters, and it's nice to see the art being colored as well.
I hope you nothing but the best! Keep up the good work!